Looking thru many o the blogs there were two blogs that really stood up to me by the way they wrote and really had alot of peronality in them and i thought to be an A blog. "What you make of it" was one blog that did a great job. She really put alot of hr personality in her blogs and made it seem like she was talking to us and not just at the computer. She used the word "I" a lot which made it about herself and got herself involved alot instead of being a runon and making it seem like just a normal writing assignment. For her first blog she talked about what college really meant to her and she asked herself questions like What if I never end up finding my place in the world? What if I never find a major that fits me? This made all of us really thinking about this and find an answer for ourselves.
When you first go on the blog College:Revealed the first thing that pops up at you is the title, already the title is interesting because it has alot to say and what her thoughts are about college. The way she structured each blog in a different way catches your attention because there is variety and you know each blog is different and wont be like all the others. This blogger really put her own style in the way she writes it and the way she wants it to be read with all the punctuation marks and different wording. In her most recent blog she states by saying "Now i could talk about the obvious matter of time management, which goes hand in hand with this, but rather i want to talk about work itself. I cant stress its importance!!!!!" with just this line really captures not only her personality but the way she wants it to be read.
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